When I gave myself to him,
It was the perfect rhyme of couplets.
He: the smack of consonants against teeth and lips;
And I was all the vowels in long sighs and high-pitched pleasure.
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Into almost every life there is one special romance that seems to stand out from all the others, and in this superb poem, Lillian, you gave voice to that one special and unforgettable romance. Although this is a poignant poem, thoughts of that one enchanting love echo all through this beautifully written and expressed poem. Though we cherish dreams that one special love may be re-lived, that one endearing language of love may reverberate through your body again, it rarely if ever does. This wonderful poem expresses that loss quite effectively. Carl.
Erotic and sublime, all at once. Bravo