Wednesday, May 27, 2009

The Lost In Touch Comments

Rating: 5.0

Lowering my eyes in these Wondry hills
I loathe myself in lies
Seeing a dark tree and a plain surroundings
I feel myself thinking
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Randy Bolante Jr
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Randy, a truly heartfelt poem. You have written so sensitively and beautifully. 10 Karin Anderson

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Priyanka Bhowmick 27 May 2009

lovely composition. wonderful imagination 10++

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Ency Bearis 27 May 2009

interesting write...well expressed...great piece....10

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James Mclain 27 May 2009

to lie awake on her soft cotton cloud, drifting in and out of her soft pink mouth..well you found her..you do the work...nice write...iip

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LOVEFOOL Aka 27 May 2009

Wonderful well written poetry 10+++

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Randy Bolante Jr

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