Tuesday, January 27, 2009

The Lost Dream Comments

Rating: 3.8

Baby, you left to another person
since then Iam depressed
Nothing you were, but everything
now Iam lonely and devastated
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Samweli Butobi
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Cindy Kreiner Sera 27 April 2009

written straight from a broken heart - sad is the pain and longing felt, the need to turn the clock back...can one? Very well written Samweli

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A powerful deep desire runs through this poem that is terrific in its tanacity.

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Violler Godfray 29 January 2009

Your poem is more than nice nor best.I think you should start aiming to be poet

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John Smith 28 January 2009

Wow, great peice of writing, please keep on doing so, I would love to read more.

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Samweli Butobi

Samweli Butobi

Mwanza Tanzania
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