Sunday, July 26, 2009

The Loss Of My Sister Comments

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I wish there were words I can say
what I feel from day to day
Nobody knows what I'd do
For abother moment with you
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Sharon Reniff
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Unknown 18 May 2018

I love this poem. It holds so much feeling in it. You are such a good poem writer I lost my sister, but not to death she choose willingly to go, I understand the pain you feel and I am so sorry about it, you don't know me, yes, but it dose not mean I cant give you my sympathy one saying I like is live on, grow strong, and move on maybe this will help.

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Sara Beloved 27 July 2009

A very well written poem.

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Milica Franchi De Luri 27 July 2009

This is sad poem, but very well written, in stanzas and rhymes- my favorite style, Milica

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Sharon Reniff

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