Sunday, November 15, 2009

The Loss Of My Breath Comments

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My heart like a toy,
To that special boy.
It was all destroyed,
But I have no choice.
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Christopher Is Dead (but I'm More Than Alive) 25 November 2009

Wow, this is really good. It flows nicely, your word choice is awesome. I especially love the second stanza. Such a perfect simile.

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