Tuesday, February 12, 2008

The Lord Of All Illusions Comments

Rating: 3.7

The love that fate, in humor,
May grant a younger heart.
Will keep it pure and wholesome,
Though It's been torn apart.
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GREENWOLFE 1962
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manya 24 April 2018

Add a comment.as good. as. best

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Cristy Upshaw 09 June 2009

Love the title, enjoyed the read immensely. Took me to another place in time.

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i know about lost love...it does hurt..this illusion keeps us going, , people would rea; ise and change

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~ Jon London ~ 06 March 2009

I think its important that we know what we have been blessed with, the lord works in mysterious ways, what is given so freely can and will be taken away.

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Underrated piece. I totally agree with the points you made. it is like backsliding.. the demons just become more...

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Wolfey, All of your poems are really good-it's difficult to choose.A ten from me.

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Kaspa Richards 29 September 2008

this is a fantastic poem i wish i had penned it extremely well wrote thank you it was a pleasure to read

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King Happy 30 August 2008

I know some people who have fallen for this illusion. Well done as it inspires me to wake them up.

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Katherine Sessor 27 August 2008

A poem that should be higher then it's voting rate. This is a great poem that deserves at least near a 10. It says so much and gives advice aswell. It flows through the readers mind after they have read it and it stays in one's heart. Least mine anyway. I love it. Kat, =)

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angelianne 1012 27 August 2008

what a fine illusion...awesome and very impressive poem...it surprised me to see the average vote when i fisrt read this poem...it made me wonder how can a great poem, with equally great insight and words and flow can have an average vote of 5.1..for me this poem is a 10+...mr. greenwolf is simply one of the best poet here on this site...

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Dee Daffodil 15 August 2008

Wolfey...I don't think I had read this one before. I'm very impressed with the tremendous insight you have here... Nicely done...as usual. Hugs, Dee

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Rema Prasanna 29 July 2008

our legends say world itself is an illusion.. lord of illusion is an add on format to that. described well and it is a write with insight...10 and more stars Rema

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Sara Coslett 28 July 2008

Wolfey - Good advice, I have a feeling though people who are addicted to their life as a victim will not heed your warning. ~ Sara

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Ted Sheridan 21 July 2008

I think this is one of your top writes.

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Patricia Gale 19 July 2008

The Grand illusion. Fine work G.

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Harry Couchon Jr 13 July 2008

Greenwolfe that last verse speaks the truth I wish I could have back all the time I spent trying to get her to fall in love with me again

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Vidyadhar Durgekar 11 July 2008

Truth....It is an illusion like the life itself. In my poem I felt life itself is an illusion Here the infatuation is an illusion .It is the truth judged and accepted erroneously by the young mind in love Good poem..........my 10

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Tsira Goge 18 June 2008

A short term loss of memory... ....................................... Without this short an amnesia, Would be great emptiness only... .....10... Tsira

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Rema Prasanna 09 June 2008

Amazing, I can visualize your wisdom, lord of all illusions and one illusionary world, conflicting conclusion, I agree on your final statement. Great intelligent work

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C J 18 April 2008

I also i would pick these one from you from your long list of poetrys, altough i'm just a beginer, funny thing it is that i wan make a poetry similar like these one but with different flow, but you allready have the right title, so thearfore i believe your is write it more properly and deserve these title and u did it very well with The Lord of All Illusions

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