The Lord Jesus has delayed His second coming
Violence, wars and rumors of wars have been spread
And we are still here watching acts unbecoming
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Aha another villanelle.. wondrously constructed. You have done your homework Now we need to get Kelly writing one.
Thanks much, Wes. They are rather restrictive, so are not that easy.
I am not very familiar with villanelles, but it appears that you have followed the rules for creating one perfectly. The is a scripture somewhere that states that no man knows the hour of his coming. He will come when the time is right. 'If ye are prepared ye shall not fear.'
Thanks, Kim. Judging by the conditions of the world, I think it will be soon.
Violence, wars and rumors of wars have been spread and such a time provokes thought. Lord Jesus has delayed his second coming and humanity is still waiting for him. The world is divided and attacks are incoming. Everywhere we find sorrows and agony. We hope Lord will come soon to was sins from this world and establish peace. An excellent thoughtful poem is shared.10
I enjoyed this thought-provoking poem. You have done well in producing a villanelle.
Thank you Grace. This was my first, but probably not my last.