The Lord and the Ladee rode into the night
Her arms entwined around him tight
The horse they rode was dark, glistening black
He majestically carried them both on his back
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What a wonderful poem! I'm sorry it took me so long to come and read your
poem. I have not been well, but i feel good this morning. Your picture is vivid.
Your words flow well. Particularly, in the mid portion. You must have had fun
writing this. If I may, the ending was a little weak. It stands out because the
rest is so very good. I'm speaking of the last two lines. Still, a wondrous poem!
GW62
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What a wonderful poem! I'm sorry it took me so long to come and read your poem. I have not been well, but i feel good this morning. Your picture is vivid. Your words flow well. Particularly, in the mid portion. You must have had fun writing this. If I may, the ending was a little weak. It stands out because the rest is so very good. I'm speaking of the last two lines. Still, a wondrous poem! GW62