Saturday, October 25, 2008

The Loom Of Time (Anon) Comments

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Man’s life is laid in the loom of time
To a pattern he does not see
While the weavers and the shuttles fly
Till the dawn of eternity
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Wojja Fink
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Karl Swartz 09 September 2022

Is this anonymous, or written by Wojja Fink? Hilary (below) says it was written by Ernest Feetam. Lorraine (below) says it was written by Harold Clough. Subroto (below) seems to accept that it was written by Wojja. Poetseers.org shows 'Author Unknown'. C'mon, people! Have some standards.

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Hilary Maginnis 16 August 2018

I have the original poem cut from the Bingley Guardian in 1949 and sent to my mum in Australia with another poem called “Tis Breakfast Time”. also written by Ernest.The poem was written by my grandfather Ernest Feetam. This may interest you as it is a beautiful poem

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Lorraine Chappell 03 December 2012

This poem was written by my maternal grandmother's cousin's husband. His name was Harold Clough. It's a most beautiful poem which was recited to me by my grandmother from an early age and I'm proud to be related to the poet.

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Subroto Chatterjee 24 April 2009

That's an interesting thought..Dark threads with gold and silver ones. Beauty and the Beast? All things bright and beautiful, but with some aberrations too? That's life. Imperfections. Good story you've woven there, poet friend! Cheers. Subroto

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Fay Slimm 25 October 2008

Very commanding in it's approach John and filled with well chosen metaphor, the end verse especially strong, reminding us all that the loom will one day be silent for each one of us. Thank you for this posting. greetings from Fay.

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