Thursday, January 8, 2009

The Looking Glass Comments

Rating: 5.0

Jealousy and hate consumes your soul
Put a foot wrong and lose your control
Your digging and digging till you make a hole
So fake everyday you play out a role
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Noel Madison 23 February 2009

This is the type of poem that will keep the reader thinking and thinking for ages.

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J Marsters 12 January 2009

Full of so man deep feelings. I like the way it was describing how one person stereotypes others only to cover thier own insecurities. great poem

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Amelia Lee 11 January 2009

so well written. inventive idea put into words most of us can't even try to speak. this is perfection in my eyes

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