The Look On My Wife's Face … [ Marriage Mistake(S): Over And Over; Inspired By Elena Plotkin's "The Look On Your Face Says It All"; A Bit Of A Fib From Bri (A Bit): Short] Comments

Bri, you've captured it all: humour sadness loneliness aloneness depression hope...The Blues! Awesome job! I invite you to read some of my poetry that addresses some of these issues. Please let me know what you think. Thanks again.

Oh yes Bri..our faces can tell many a story...it's our gift or curse lol

This is a jailed (or caged) bird's song. Quite humorous. Well-rhymed. Keep this away from her eyes. Since you probe into the grammar of others, may I ask you - isn't there something odd with your use of simple past and past past in the last two lines (tried, had failed; stuck, had been....jailed) . Since I don't have a list of poems, here is a 10.

Dark. Very, very dark. This reminds me of what a friend from Germany once described as das Gefängnis der Liebe. Extremely well written, though. This is an excellent poem.