Monday, July 7, 2008

The Lonliest Tree Comments

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I am the lonely tree at the top of the mountain.
...standing all by itself.
It's leaves falling down, onto the trees below.
They are tears crying out in shame.
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Amber Zenisek
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Javier Falcon 07 July 2008

I like it, but there is a slight concept difference, first, third, then first person again... Should try and keep it uniform, good write anyhow...

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Amber Zenisek

Fremont, Ohio
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