Wednesday, June 14, 2017

The Longing Soul Comments

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I am all alone
In this lonely cold room
My friends are not here
I am filled with fear
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Kristel May Waskin
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Dr Antony Theodore 25 June 2017

But I am not that friendly To be honest, I am not really comfy Oh, loneliness please spare me ife is not worth living That seems you all are ignoring me Please do not waste The great friendship that was once so sweet These are the points i collected after carefully reading your poem.. This poem is a meditation on friendship, loneliness, being away from friends, doubt whether they have forgotten you. No one wants to be alone in this world. We all need love, care, friendship. Wonderful poem. God bless u for writing this. tony

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it is nice to hear a feedback from you. Thank you for the warm message upon reading my poem. I miss my friends so much. And yeah, you are right that we all need someone that will love and care for us each day.

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Jazib Kamalvi 15 June 2017

An impressive poem on true friendship. Thanks

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Rajnish Manga 14 June 2017

You have been very humble and honest to admit your intense longing for your close friends who have not been meeting you, of late, for whatever reason. This is indeed a very lovely expression. Thanks. I thought it would be easy To be honest, I am not really comfy Oh, loneliness please spare me

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