Tuesday, September 5, 2017

The Longest Snake Comments

Rating: 5.0

the night fell too soon
and the way I am, I am weak
the way you are; I think you're weak
but you don't show it
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Dejo Samuel
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Subhas Chandra Chakra 05 September 2017

you only talk with your body like a wild animal trying to use words and my hands are clumsy and the words I pick are steel and i begin to dote you Beautifully penned. Thanks for sharing it. 10+

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Dejo Samuel 06 September 2017

Thanks Chandra

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Bernard F. Asuncion 05 September 2017

Such a poignant poem... A huge 10+++++

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Dejo Samuel 06 September 2017

Glad you enjoyed it Bernard

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