I always dreamed of the longest poem i could ever make,
To touch your ears and makes you want to cry,
That could make the beautiful waterfalls never run dry,
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I LOVE THIS ONE! ! ! Hope others could read this...I felt every words in it...very nice-penned.thanks for sharing this wonderful piece..
You have a great sense of music in your poem. My complaint is that your images are rather cliche, and you don't really say anything not obvious to most poetry readers. You are young. You need to read and develop the mind. Already I can see a great heart.