Monday, February 12, 2007

The Long Walk In Comments

Rating: 5.0

It is again, the line of rulers, emporers
The long walk of brave little men
Passing in silence
As they guide themselves in
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Tailor Bell
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Well, jim ALWAYS puts it better than me! An important message delivered eruditely and eloquently and engagingly indeed. Grand work Tailor. t x

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Will Barber 26 February 2007

A message I much admired, both for content and artistry. - Will

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Not a member No 4 24 February 2007

As always the poetry is terrific from end to end. Your use of the language is so precise and distinctively 'you' at the same time. The storytelling is stunning. Captures this ritualistic process to perfection. Genuinely brilliant! ! I was on planet headache for a wee while I must admit! ! jim

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gone gone 13 February 2007

Tailor strong statement...beautifully said...thanks Love, D.

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Cali Baja 13 February 2007

I enjoyed this one a lot Tailor especially the little men (think I know what this one's about) . You merge the subjects very nicely with a thoughtful reflection at the end. *Cal*

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Alison Cassidy 13 February 2007

Tailor, this is a lyrical lament for all those 'brave little men' who have met an early death over the centuries and who are taking the long walk 'where spirit discards law and defies matter' home to mother, to hearth to where they belong. It is a finely crafted piece written in sepia tones with strength and compassion. Definitely a man's poem. love, Allie xxxx

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Linda Ori 13 February 2007

Wonderful imagery, and beautifully written, Tailor. A fine piece of work, and powerful words softly spoken. This is both tender, and bold at the same time - brilliant! Linda

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