Saturday, March 7, 2009

The Long Walk Comments

Rating: 5.0

Remember when we went on a long walk
Just you and me going through the red roses
The chilly wind had been blowing since we took our first step
They whispered “Today you get drunk by me”
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Afrasiab khan
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Sadiqullah Khan 09 March 2009

Amazingly beautiful Afrasiab. Very mature wrtie. Keep it going. BrAVO 10+++

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