Friday, September 12, 2008

The Long Stone Comments

Rating: 5.0

With clouded skies above me I do climb this winding pathway,
And yet I feel that I am not alone,
So many years have passed and yet its secrets still remain there,
Within that place they laid that ancient stone.
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ANDREW BLAKEMORE
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Ernestine Northover 18 September 2008

Excellent! ! A real high class write Andrew, and full of meanings that affect our minds. Great stuff. Top marks. Love and hugs Ernestine XXX

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Bonnie Collins 12 September 2008

What a lovely mysterious write! ! Filled with so much imagery, and toned with alot of wonder..... I especially enjoye the stone, as it made me feel deep within, as I feel we all have an ancient stone somewhere within us.... Bonnie

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Ramesh T A 12 September 2008

Mystery remains forever for the mind to muse over them again and again! It is the experience nobody can fail to forget and say all in verses many as you have done for the long stone! something novel and modern!

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