Sunday, January 10, 2010

The Long Road To Nowhere Comments

Rating: 5.0

Desolation had overtaken him
As he trudged night and day
Through brambles and thickets
Armed with just a backpack
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Sandra Martyres
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Dr. Ratan Bhattacharjee 25 January 2010

your fantastic poem makes me write this comment. Humanity plunged in sorrow is a great theme... Finely expressed with choicest vocab..

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Kesav Easwaran 16 January 2010

I must say this is the best of all the poems you have posted in this site....very much subtle and symbolic...the theme is well thought out...and presentation impressive The metaphor- hidden- in this piece is Humanity...badly bruised and hurt...leaving this earthly scene? ...10*

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Marieta Maglas 13 January 2010

No one seemed disturbed by His ugly and terribly distorted face The birds of heaven sang to him A welcome song that he longed to hear No one else had, not even his natural Mother wonderful philosophical poem belonging to symbolism 10/10

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Samanyan Lakshminarayanan 10 January 2010

A BEAUTIFUL POEM SANDRA...AS YOU READ IT A SENSE OF PEACE SETS IN..THE FACE IS SOMETHING WE CAN NEVER TAKE CREDIT FOR...WHY BE HURT BY IT TOO

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Dr Hitesh Sheth 10 January 2010

Your poem reminded me of a book, 'The monk who sold his ferrari'. Offcourse God and nature are the only thing, who accept us unconditionally....a good write...

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Mamta Agarwal 10 January 2010

mother nature embraces, loves, holds and heals as nothing else can. quite lyrical Sandra, very compassionate write Mamta

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Sandra Fowler 10 January 2010

When the soul is beautiful, physical attributes cease to matter. May the birds of Heaven sing their solace forever. A beautiful, compelling write.10/10. Love, Sandra

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Ramesh T A 10 January 2010

Beautiful poem depicting a wonderful world of peace and joy only mystic can reach! Nice to read!

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Ricardo Flores 10 January 2010

This is beautiful, as well as generous. Great poem overall.

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