The Long Lavender Look Comments

Col. Sahab, I had read read the original by Susan and introduced it to Kavita. Both of us loved it. And, on my request, Kavita has done this beautiful translation. But, at no stage had I thought that this lovely poem could qualify as a ghazal. I am thrilled. I am not a singer. but love dearly, ghazals rendered by Gulam Ali Sahab, Jagjit Singh& Chitra Singh etc. Even Greatest ever Rafi Sahab! It would be matter of great joy for all of us-Susan, Kavita, me etc..) if someone could give voice to this poem (or may I say Ghazal) and post on PH. Could you help Sir? ? Thank You! ! -unnikrishnan

thank you sir, for reading and comment on my translation....original poem is really awesome.

sukriya nosheen Irfan ji....credit goes to Mr.unnikrishnan sir...

sukriya sir.....

thank you susan ji, all credit goes to Mr.unnikrishnan sir, who inspire me to translate this beautiful poem, and also correct my mistakes that i have done during translating.

Thank you mam....