Wednesday, May 9, 2012

The Long Goodbye Comments

Rating: 5.0

He opens the door
And says hello
Who are you
You're no one I know
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Andrew Bell
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Andrew Bell 10 May 2012

Thanks for the comments guys. It means alot to me. Lenore it's not about my Father, it's something I thought of years ago and wrote a few different versions of it. I just never heard of a poem about alzheimers before and I thought I could write one. But I did want it to be sad and personal.

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Lenore Lee 10 May 2012

Woa. This poem is amazing. I'm guessing it's about you're father having alzheimers, right? This is so sad and flows so beautifully, I love it.

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Eric Cockrell 10 May 2012

you have a talent for exposing your heart... keep writing! good poetry.

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Dave Walker 10 May 2012

Fantastic poem, really like this. Love how it flows.

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Simon Collins 09 May 2012

Nice poem mate, I enjoyed it, thank you

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Andrew Bell

Andrew Bell

Sydney, Australia
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