Saturday, August 29, 2015

The Long Awaited Words Comments

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Your hidden words in enchanted tower!
And that below my thirsty lips,
Need something to blossom as a flower,
A few hot kisses and the cooling sips!
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Akhtar Jawad
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Loke Kok Yee 02 October 2015

beautiful rhyme makes a short poem so divine.

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Amitava Sur 30 August 2015

I liked these simple sweet words where the mind yearns to be in a fantasy world, away from this mechanical life. Thanks for sharing the feeling.

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Khalida Bano Ali 29 August 2015

What a sweet poem........................................10

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