Tuesday, March 6, 2012

The Lonely Train On The Lonely Track With 24 Coaches Painted Black Comments

Rating: 4.8

Among the brambles of a shattered heart lies my soul in crags,
Among the shambles of life torn apart lies my spirit in rags;
Tears streaming down my face as snakes crawl on my body lifeless
Leaving amigos and flamingos away at the home, oh life pointless.
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Harindhar Reddy
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Prakhar Mishra 19 June 2012

it has all to cherish the way u describe the pain etc is simply magical. i love reading ur poems

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Harindhar Reddy 20 May 2020

Thank for your cherishing review on the poem 🙏🙏👍👍

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Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi 09 March 2012

Get out of this 'rickety rock' yackety-yak! tickety tack. You have talents. paint those twelve coaches with color of your choice. Good Luck..

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Harindhar Reddy 20 May 2020

Thank you for a rocking comment on the poem 🙏🙏👍👍

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Ekaterina M. Polischuk 09 March 2012

good poem... with interesting way of describing your soul :) ....

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Harindhar Reddy 20 May 2020

Nice of you for a nice comment on the poem 🙏🙏👍👍

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Harindhar Reddy

Harindhar Reddy

Haliya, Hyderabad, India
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