The Lonely Star Comments

The stars are like feelings - many different states and shapes. The difference is in the adjective we give to them. They need to be carefully written because all the stars can fall. Do not worry, this will sow eternally.

Hazel, I love how this poem embodies both nature and the loneliness that we humans experience. Such a profound piece of writing!

Love this lonely star and her thoughts.

''She hides from the crowd Shouting so loud, She hides from prying eyes, She hides from people's lies, ''....I can quite relate to this stanza! which is as well, a great way to start the poem; developing into a new spring light of resurrection, of beginning to live in a new light of hope, in a new light of new true friends that they may enrich each other's life. As always, a heart-warming poem!

It is really a beautiful poem on life and present society having startling expression. This poem is metaphorically strong too. She is compared with a lonly star with outshining the vastness, and the greatness. of the Universe. An impressive write. Thanks for sharing.10

I read the comments from Valsa and Geetha and Bill and it is obvious that this poem has touched their hearts too. I wonder if there is something in this lonely miles because of the deceit / Of friends, of life and too many disappointing repeats that incubates poetic talent in some people... something about feeling one's face is pressed against the window of life...Well done, dear friend. Well done.10...

A Beautiful poem. The Lonely Star shining so brightly on light of goodness despite all pain. A spring of hope keeps her smiling. Loved reading it.

Wow, there is a lifetime in this poem, a star shines with hurt but humility and above all, love of goodness, May this star shine to times indefinite! Brilliant! !