Wednesday, December 23, 2015

The Lonely River Comments

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Wandering through the busy street lanes,
Where children ran here and there,
Women rushed to fill their pots with water,
Children blocked their way playing,
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divya pillai
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Pritam Bhowmick 16 June 2017

Nice poem indeed ma'am!

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That Man 24 December 2015

Yes....my mind is blown to bits...you have monumental potential.... i'd enjoy reading this agaim

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Divya Lakshmi Pillai 25 December 2015

thank you

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Muhammad Imtiyaz 23 December 2015

nice conversation with a river...it reflects your deep concern for its deterioration...nicely done...thanks for sharing..

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Divya Lakshmi Pillai 25 December 2015

Thanks for your comment

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