Tuesday, May 10, 2011

The Lonely King Comments

Rating: 5.0

Sitting in my lonesome tower
Without you by my side
Looking out this window
Upon our kingdom makes me cry
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Kurtis Cwiklo
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Bella Hernandez 02 November 2011

AMAZING! ! ! a kingdom is no kingdom without your soul mate :) i love all the poems you made so far! PLZ keep writing cant wait to see more you have real talent for poetry. Hope your inspiration inspires you more ~Bella

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Mohammad Akmal Nazir 10 May 2011

I love the way you wrote the poem. Deep and wise with Great imagery. Excellent write. I rate it 10. Thanks for sharing..... Please read and rate my poem 'A humble complaint' on page 2. Please use the search box by typing the name of the poem if the page doesn't open with the title of the poem.

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