The Lonely Heart... Comments

heartfelt ink my friend. nice write

This is a good poem, it could be a great poem but the use of ur u is lazy and English is such a beautiful language with so many lovely words Don't mangle it Love it and caress it like a lover. Use it to its full extent be brave, be bold. I see so much potential in your poetry don't take the easy path. Forgive me for being so hard. Thanks for sharing. BB : O)

vey beautiful heartfelt lament of loneliness... love is in your cards little btother... keep writig your beautiful poetry.

A lonely heart is no picnic my friend. It can only find solace in love. Thanks for the write.

Soul is right. Soon you will see the light of happiness dear brother.

Be ready to get separated from loneliness because soon what will taking over is only happiness, so be ready any where anytime soon, are you ready? ...cheers_Soul