Tuesday, August 26, 2008

The Lonely Child Comments

Rating: 5.0

Dusty deserted sidewalks
Barred doors with locks
Dustbins bursting with dirt
Greet the lonesome child
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jyoti saxena
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Reetessh Sabrr 28 August 2009

yet another empathetic piece of writing jyoti di, its tuching!

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Ashraful Musaddeq 07 October 2008

An excellent poem. So nice and so touchy. 10+

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Kee Thampi 07 October 2008

Hopefully gong to a Godly memoirs The world soundly sleeps While he looks for a place His head to keep. keep to be here...

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Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 31 August 2008

'My God on high......loneliness is goodbye.......alone......the winds...the dust and the deserted road.......i grabbed the child.

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Sathyanarayana M V S 28 August 2008

Very very deep, emotional poem. I think sufferred minds produce better sentiments, more emotion and the right dose of feelings and can give a better understanding of the society and those suffering millions...Kudos to your art...10++++++++++++++++

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Deepti Agarwal 28 August 2008

Ahaaaa... A Lovely sad poem.....

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