The Lonely Child Comments

yet another empathetic piece of writing jyoti di, its tuching!

An excellent poem. So nice and so touchy. 10+

Hopefully gong to a Godly memoirs The world soundly sleeps While he looks for a place His head to keep. keep to be here...

'My God on high......loneliness is goodbye.......alone......the winds...the dust and the deserted road.......i grabbed the child.

Very very deep, emotional poem. I think sufferred minds produce better sentiments, more emotion and the right dose of feelings and can give a better understanding of the society and those suffering millions...Kudos to your art...10++++++++++++++++

Ahaaaa... A Lovely sad poem.....