Wednesday, August 16, 2017

The Lonely Bird. Comments

Rating: 4.9

There's a bird up high, above
In solitude, standing on the lamppost
While the morning is still cool
I lift up my head to watch
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SY Wong ...
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Akhtar Jawad 10 August 2019

What else the lonely bird may be, it's the ancient nature. A thoughtful poem.

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Jane Campion 15 June 2019

A true poetess with great observational powers.

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Philo Yan 11 March 2019

Their singing especially in the morning is a welcome sound to wake up to. Lovely poem!

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Sy Wong. 11 March 2019

Thanks Philo, I like to watch the birds.

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Chinedu Dike 20 May 2018

A pleasing write-up, very philosophical in tone. Thanks for sharing Sy and do remain enriched.

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Rebecca Navarre 07 November 2017

What An Ever So Beautiful Feel! ! ! ! ! ! Capturing The Moment Of Time With Feelings And Memories To Carry For Life! ! ! ! ! Breath Taking! ! ! ! ! Congratulations! ! ! ! ! Beyond 10S! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! +++++

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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 07 November 2017

Beautiful poem. Very Philosophical. I loved it. Congratulations Sy Wong

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Sy Wong 07 November 2017

Thanks to Poem Hunter for giving us the opportunity.

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Sy Wong 07 November 2017

Thanks to all the comments..Let us all try to write poems..beautiful..

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Bharati Nayak 10 November 2017

Knowing life, knowing well I can tell of his vigilant eyes Observing the winds and its directions From above.. - - - -The calmness comes with wisdom.The bird knows from where the wind blows, its directions and so confidently standing on the top.of lamppost, so cool and so calm. Thanks Sy Wong for sharing an insightful poem which rightly deserves to be chosen as Poem of the Day.

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Lyn Paul 07 November 2017

There is great wisdom in these beautiful words.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 07 November 2017

The poem conveys the message about life poetically in great visual detail. Great write.

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Edward Kofi Louis 07 November 2017

Like an icon! ! With the muse of life. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Bernard F. Asuncion 07 November 2017

Such a heartwarming poem, Sy......10++++

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Subhas Chandra Chakra 07 November 2017

A nicely crafted ode to the early morning view of nature. A great marvel of art. 10+++

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Rajnish Manga 07 November 2017

Lonely bird is indeed a metaphor used for an enlightened soul which is one in a million. The poet has rightly said 'He is good and still stood, as if knowing all'. Thanks.

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Anil Kumar Panda 07 November 2017

Nicely done about the bird standing with all its pride on a lamppost. Simple and beautiful. Congrats.

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Jette Blackstone 07 November 2017

A lovely poem about the bird who observes. The poet, also an observer, can look out at such a bird and see his story, convey it with words. Thanks for sharing...well deserved poem of the day...

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Dr Dillip K Swain 07 November 2017

An amazing poem on! Watching a lone bird standing on stamp post is a fascinating experience. The brief poem is brilliantly drafted. Congratulations

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Michael Hopkins 07 November 2017

AllI can say is this is a beautiful poem.

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Tom Allport 07 November 2017

a nicely descriptive albeit short poem of the way of the nature? and you are right their is always one! Knowing Life, Knowing Well? ........................ well written Sy

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Kumarmani Mahakul 07 November 2017

Beautiful poem on life and early morning with haunting expression. Thanks for sharing and congratulations for being selected as the poem of the day.

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