Tuesday, March 13, 2012

'The Loneliness Of The Long Distance Runner' Comments

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As a small child my father
Showed me the pretty lights of
The big city
As we drove home at night.
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Jan Freundschuh
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Unwritten Soul 27 March 2012

I love the way you start this poem, it's so nostalgic and when you walk with the time you bring all with you the feeling, thought and observations...i like this poem, sound so original, of course hahaha, keep writing_Unwritten soul

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