Friday, August 22, 2008

! ! ! The Lone Void! ! ! Comments

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tears yet ruffle faster unrestrained
in the reeks of lone void
may be returning bird breathless
yet not baffled by the storm in the nest
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Dr subhendu kar
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A lone void, so hard to fill. This poem has a slight haunting to it, intrigueing with thread of mystery. Wonderful poetry.; D

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Shelley L Baxter-stanley 04 September 2008

Yes love....is a mystery Subhendu...one that is hard to write of...or even to understand! Another Great short...piece of poetry that says so much. Take care of U and may there Always be ink in your Pen, smile. Shelley!

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Chitra - 01 September 2008

lots of profound in here, definitely will fill the void within, and help to seek answers within

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premji premji 24 August 2008

in void everything exists and in you the whole poetry...

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Anjali Sinha 23 August 2008

Yes the mystery of love is unfounded. ---in the reeks of the lone void---lots of depth in this poem. great write Dr. Kar. Keep sharing --I like it. ++++++++++++++++++10 regards anjali

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Thad Wilk 23 August 2008

A capturing and thought provoking write on these - mysteries of love! *10*! ! Best wishes Dr. Kar! ! Friend Thad

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Kris Smith 22 August 2008

Profound and poignant write my friend fine quality of writting thankyou Chris 10

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