The Locked Door Comments

A lovely poem, Gina sent me here to read it in a comment on my 'A Relationship, of Sorts'. I can see why. I like the metaphor of the door/key - works beautifully! Don't forget to keep the hinges well-oiled (but I'm not saying you should keep her spoiled) . -chuck

i really like how you express yourself and i like how you use an item as you.i think you are good as you are like me you base this pome on your fellings.kelly

Here's hoping the 'pains', 'torment', and 'filth' that you anticipate will come your way as you fall in love will wither before they reach you, as your lover says. Instead, let her 'clean feet' tread their way gently to your heart.

perhaps, after some love experiences, you could write poems of a different attitude...so long as they are different from now...that's what matters. go for it.