The Littlest Elf Comments

It's OK but not one of my favorites. Maybe if you reworked it.

3. I can't tell if you're trying to be cliched here (i.e. if this is parody) or if you're serious. If you're serious, it didn't work at all. It's a pastiche of every children's-book cliche about elves, and thus, sounds like a joke.

I can't help but like this one: -)