The Little-Simple Words About Life Comments

Thoughts expressed in the poem are good but English grammar has buried under the thoughts.

Dear poet, If you break the long lines with subordinate/co-ordinate clauses into two/three, it will be a good free verse poem. Without poetic nature, one cannot write even a single line. Wish you the best.

Woah pondering worth muse here. Imposible yet the possibilities eh. Nice to read u again adheez.

Thought provoking read and encouraging too! Optimistic views are expressed in this poem.

amazing :) I love it :)

its really brilliant adhezz.. i really liked the way you write...

Well, its an amazing poem..I agree that every single person must be self confident and must not let suffer his/her self-esteem.... 'fearers' die ten times before their death, so leave fears behind and step forward.Moreover, problems look for those who've fear to be chased by them :) i liked your thoughts :) hira

it WOULD be nice if every human had confidence in herself/himself, AND was a good person, with good conduct, AND was aware of the limitations which sometimes should be accepted by an individual, AND yet was not too easily discouraged from striving for personal achievement. a very good attempt to express, in english, your thoughts. if you remind me i will try to take the time to send a message with some advice on the english you used. there certainly were a LOT of possibles and impossibles in this 'poem', just as there are in real life. thanks for sharing. bri :)

better affirming our self, good writing, thanks.