Sunday, August 10, 2008

The Little Secret Rhyme Of My Heart Comments

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My heart leaps up and down whenever you look me in the eyes
my cheeks turn into red when you say: ' I love you'
my heart sways when you tell me: ' I wanna touch your hand '
I lose my mind when I see how much you wanna hold me in your arms
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Alison Cassidy 23 August 2008

Lily, you obviously have a great love of words and a passionate need to share them. As your poetic experience grows, you might try to cull some of them so that those that are left can shine more brightly. Great title, too. love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

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Delicia Eiland 11 August 2008

This is a very lovely poem...very interesting piece...Love it!

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Randa Ahmed 10 August 2008

This is magic..your pure words made my soul so happy :) Thank you sweet Re7ab, you made my day xx

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Trinity K 10 August 2008

, and our soul shall speak all the unspoken words hear me now: '' this is my little secret rhyme of my heart don't tell anyone about it it 's our own secret now! '' ............. lovely....////////// thnx..

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