Saturday, October 10, 2015

The Little Savita Child....... [childhood; Moon; My Response To Savita Tyagi's Poem 'playful Moon'; Short] Comments

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Many moons ago in a desert landscape,
a little girl, up from Earth, at me did gape.
She had long straight black hair (with one curl) .
I'd watch her ply** the bricks and sometimes twirl.
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Bri Edwards
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Valsa George 13 October 2015

This sounds so cute! But this 'Savita child' sometimes grows into a hard core philosopher or even a mystic! I am sure she enjoyed this poem!

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Kelly Kurt 10 October 2015

A fun piece, Bri. Nicely done.

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Savita Tyagi 10 October 2015

No matter where I live the child in me brings the most fun for me. Thanks Bri for such playful response. Loved your poem.

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Bri Edwards 10 October 2015

** PLY intransitive verb [DEFINITION #2] 1 : to apply oneself steadily 2 : to go or travel regularly bri :)

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