Monday, December 15, 2008

The Little One Comments

Rating: 4.4

The Little One arrives
From heavenly drives

The Little One says like hello
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Sameer Ahmed
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Yelena M. 23 June 2009

Such a captivating poem, Sameer..Children are flowers of our life, and you express it here with such joy, love and inspiration.Thanks for sharing! A Smile to you and best wishes :) A.

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nomad omnia 20 March 2009

beautiful Ahmed, thanks for stirring fond memories :) N

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Madeline Berry 24 February 2009

Great writing, you have a gift ;)

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sumaira .....ir 01 February 2009

sooooooooooooo swt + cute poem a wonderful tribute 2 swty cuty baby it give smile on our faces love it THANKS dear 4 sharing++++++++++++++10 :)

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sumaira .....ir 01 February 2009

sooooooooooooo swt + cute poem a wonderful tribute 2 swty cuty baby it give smile on our faces love it THANKS dear 4 sharing++++++++++++++10 :)

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A. Nonymous 31 January 2009

I like this one the most out of your poems...good job Sameer 10/10

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Pampero Jadan 22 January 2009

brilliant poem the words dances together unity is perfect i am not surprized cause this you are from indian blood they have too much talent u did awesome paka! well done doctor

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Pampero Jadan 22 January 2009

brilliant poem the words dances together unity is perfect i am not surprized cause this you are from indian blood they have too much talent u did awesome paka! well done doctor

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Marama Kelly 21 January 2009

This is really beautiful and is well worded, well expressed and has a good flow and rhythmn from beginning to end. The imagery that comes from your words shows so much adoration and love for this new life that has entered the world and all the wonders and joys of life are seen emanated through this child. You have a talent indeed that is worth sharing to the world. Well done. Many blessings to you

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A.M.WOOD meme 20 January 2009

I thouroughly enjoyed this piece...just so beautifully written!

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Chitra - 19 January 2009

an absolutely delightful write on the little bundle of joy

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Ivor Hogg 18 January 2009

Rhyming couplets a wise choice for this delightful offering

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Iris Washington 15 January 2009

A truly delightful poem about a child just starting out to discover.

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Meggie Gultiano 02 January 2009

a blessing to have a little one around. Lovely thoughts.Thanks

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Ruerd Visser 30 December 2008

The little one will live on in our hearts thanks to you. Heavenly greetings from home Boomfriend Ruerd

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Linda Moore 25 December 2008

Beauty in the child and your poem.....10

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Surayya Abbas 17 December 2008

It's a nice poem full of love and sweetness. This will be a lovely gift and rememberance for Fozan when he will be grown up. Fozan really deserves this...Ayya Aapi.

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Mamta Agarwal 17 December 2008

Sameer, your joy on becoming an uncle is evident from this poem- sense of wonder, love, tenderness- a very lovely poem and a perfect ending.10 Mamta

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Naru Kaede 17 December 2008

This poem is very lovely, A new born nephew... congratulation... You decribe it very interesting, than I can imagine how happy you are... hehehe... I bet he/she must be cute... Regard, Naru Kaede,

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So sweet and cute... They are all so little when born great work KRISTA

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