The Little One Poem by Sameer Ahmed

The Little One

Rating: 4.4


The Little One arrives
From heavenly drives

The Little One says like hello
With a sweet, beautiful mellow

The Little One cries
With shine in the eyes

The Little One smiles
With innocent styles

The Little One takes feed
Like a new sown seed

The Little One speaks
With dimples on his cheeks

The Little One jingles
With me he intermingles

The Little One holds my hand
When he grapples to stand

The Little One plays in joy
With an invisible angelic toy

The Little One sleeps
With a tiny dream he peeps

The Little One my nephew Fozan
Named by Gran Pa, life lives on.....




(12/15/2008)

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
A. Nonymous 31 January 2009

I like this one the most out of your poems...good job Sameer 10/10

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Pampero Jadan 22 January 2009

brilliant poem the words dances together unity is perfect i am not surprized cause this you are from indian blood they have too much talent u did awesome paka! well done doctor

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Pampero Jadan 22 January 2009

brilliant poem the words dances together unity is perfect i am not surprized cause this you are from indian blood they have too much talent u did awesome paka! well done doctor

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Marama Kelly 21 January 2009

This is really beautiful and is well worded, well expressed and has a good flow and rhythmn from beginning to end. The imagery that comes from your words shows so much adoration and love for this new life that has entered the world and all the wonders and joys of life are seen emanated through this child. You have a talent indeed that is worth sharing to the world. Well done. Many blessings to you

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A.M.WOOD meme 20 January 2009

I thouroughly enjoyed this piece...just so beautifully written!

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Yelena M. 23 June 2009

Such a captivating poem, Sameer..Children are flowers of our life, and you express it here with such joy, love and inspiration.Thanks for sharing! A Smile to you and best wishes :) A.

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nomad omnia 20 March 2009

beautiful Ahmed, thanks for stirring fond memories :) N

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Madeline Berry 24 February 2009

Great writing, you have a gift ;)

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sumaira .....ir 01 February 2009

sooooooooooooo swt + cute poem a wonderful tribute 2 swty cuty baby it give smile on our faces love it THANKS dear 4 sharing++++++++++++++10 :)

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sumaira .....ir 01 February 2009

sooooooooooooo swt + cute poem a wonderful tribute 2 swty cuty baby it give smile on our faces love it THANKS dear 4 sharing++++++++++++++10 :)

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