Monday, January 18, 2010

The Little Crab Comments

Rating: 5.0

As the little crab climbed
To the top of the basket
Hoping to make an escape
The bigger crabs pulled him down
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Sandra Martyres
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Kesav Easwaran 27 January 2010

good story telling...you have tried a metaphor and a message- a bit of both...which is more of them there you decide! ...10

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Indira Renganathan 27 January 2010

Very interesting write of a story poem....thank you

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Sandra Fowler 25 January 2010

What a wise little crab! I hope that he lived happily ever after.Charming, Sandra. Always your friend, Sandra

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Samanyan Lakshminarayanan 18 January 2010

poetis story free flowing with a lovely moral

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