Friday, November 24, 2017

The Little Christmas Tree Comments

Rating: 5.0

Bruce the Spruce was a Christmas tree
He lived on Christmas Farm.
Each night he dreamed that he could bring
Cheer into someone's home.
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The Crow 06 December 2017

Yeah, that was epic, in all senses of the word. Great Story. Another Good one.

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Grace Kusta Nasralla 30 November 2017

Such good writing style. You made me love Bruce the Spruce! Great Poem.

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T Plotz 29 November 2017

Way to go Bruce, I never lost Hope; I knew you could do it. Nice poem.

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Londis Carpenter 06 December 2017

Thank you Grace; your comment means a lot

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Practicing Poetess 25 November 2017

Just in time for the season, a sweet Christmas story in poetry form, with a happy ending. A hearty Welcome to Poem Hunter, to a poet that I'm convinced we'll be hearing more from. Your initial poems posted are quite captivating, and you are already attracting positive attention!

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Kumarmani Mahakul 24 November 2017

Every year at Christmas time Bruce did as he was taught. Christmas light did dwell on face. An amazing story is brilliantly penned....10

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