Wednesday, June 19, 2013

The Little Boy Who Played The Knight Comments

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He was looking down with murmured words,
and things would leave him alone along with the birds.
He had no point, carefree in his mind,
still he signed.
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Jordan Couso
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Don Nguyen 19 June 2013

Well done poem, thanks for writing. I am sure that boy thanked her many times over for him to become a knight; but coming in he knew he would be toiled around for awhile by the devilish girl. Now since he was knighted, he has to leave her alone to go do battle for his King.

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Gajanan Mishra 19 June 2013

with honor filled with glory, thanks, I invite you to read my poems and comment and vote, thanks.

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