Saturday, September 14, 2019

The Lips Danced Comments

Rating: 5.0

Feeling inferior in a gathering,
everyone has something that I do not have,
I cried within me.
Then a thought came in my mind,
...
Read full text

Akhtar Jawad
COMMENTS
Mahtab Bangalee 16 September 2019

heart beside the heart o silently feels love it's love, itself expresses through dancing lips! ! !

0 0 Reply
Rose Marie Juan-austin 15 September 2019

Wow, what a wonderful poem, Sir Akhtar. Loved it! Yes, when you are with poetry, . you feel complete. Amazing poem from the pen of a great Poet. Onto my Poem List.

0 0 Reply
Anil Kumar Panda 14 September 2019

Poets get attention everywhere. Nothing to worry about loneliness. Nice poem. A sweet experience indeed.

0 0 Reply
Akhtar Jawad

Akhtar Jawad

Gorakhpur
Close
Error Success