The Lion's Heart Comments
Love's knelt before Lion from earliest times,
Yes, your love and my love and all of our rhymes,
For Love has no legs like a child on a swing,
Needs faith of a Lion to hear itself sing.
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Although a true Shakespearian sonnet is separated into three quatrains and a couplet, with the rhyme pattern abab, cdcd, efef, gg, and your sonnet is seven couplets together, with the rhyme pattern aabbccddbbddee, nevertheless it is very pleasing. The rhythm and the rhymes are very good. I enjoyed reading it very much. Thank you for sharing it here on Poem Hunter.
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7/31/2025 12:10:36 AM # 1.0.0
Be careful what you wish for. - 333