Friday, March 18, 2016

The Lion And The Lamb Comments

Rating: 5.0

In that cold freezing night
When the light had faded out
I remmember that sight....
That awkward beautiful sight
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Aakash Nengroo
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M Asim Nehal 19 March 2016

Superb metaphor. Please correct some spelling mistakes, Awesome poem. remmember, alley. Love is magical and knows no bound.10++

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Edward Kofi Louis 18 March 2016

In that deep dark! With ark of love and life. Thanks for sharing.

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