When we saw for the first time,
Just knowing him as a kinsman
Was just yearning to find out,
Who this handsome lad was,
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This is how love builds on...starting with very little expectations..gradually understanding each other..adjusting and matching, and finally meeting with glowing emotions. NOT showing what we are not, like in most failed marriages after tumultuous love affairs glaring with very high expectations right from the beginning. I rate it 10+ WELL DONE!
Lovely late evening he came beside, Just handed me a small piece of paper, In a simple way his wish was conveyed, No words to describe my happiness, Felt as though I was in heaven, Life has given me the best partner... Beautiful! All that begins well ends well. We should just have an open mind, believe in ourselves and say a prayer from the depth of our heart and the best will come to us sooner or later.
long after one night when silence dawned upon and birds dozed off when the seconds of clock failed to click and wake up me quick when i heard not a whisper and hearkened not for a whimper he sailed smoothly across the whispering skies and starred into the nights gazing me emptily................
Felt as though I was in heaven, Life has given me the best partner. and love sways like grin in green yet it flows ingraining blue divine, heart mellows by gentle breath and heaves sigh of relief as when entwined, souls rejoices being in unison, most passionate, and evocative too by imagery and metaphors,10+++, thanks for sharing
I hope you got a your best partner. Lovely writing. Rgds Noor (Occasionally I request you to go thru my 'Made for Each Other' which has some similarities to the theme of your poem 'Link of Destiny)
it begins and slowly develops and it culminates in life. love experience makes you a great person and a great poet. go on loving. spread your heart.. you will find that such experiences have no end. fill this universe with your love.
Flowething emotion…culminated in coveted eventuality…Best Partner Voted 10+ Ms. Nivedita UK
No words to describe my happiness, Felt as though I was in heaven, Life has given me the best partner... ' Nice write....and life has given you the best partner All the best. Good poem Enjoyed reading it Thanks for sharing with me
'No words to describe my happiness, Felt as though I was in heaven, Life has given me the best partner... ' Nice write....and life has given you the best partner All the best. Good poem Enjoyed reading it Thanks for sharing with me
you sure happy with your life.. i think you made right choices! nice write!
Life has given me the best partner... absolutely a lovely poem of love and romance. your expectation came true. how lovely! ! ! thank you. tony