The Lines On My Face Comments

The poem has an eye catching title, loved it very much. Each line is an evidence of the activities, emotions, pleasures and pains of life that were offered to us, and we must not be ashamed of any of the lines. Each line is a certificate of experience and wisdom, Thanks for the pieces of advice you gave, these are priceless. A word of thanks to Noreen Carden and Hazel Evelyn Durham for sharing their beautiful thoughts and words with us, those are truly wonderful.

Beautiful poem that conveys an all too true message/advice: Live your life~enjoy your life~ and stand tall...even after a fall... loved this one Lyn, thank you for yet some more good advice!

Hi Lynn great poem whenever i see those women and men on telly who have had plastic surgery i always think how sad that we are ashamed to show our life history written in the lines on our faces well done great read

life is precious. each moment a treasure to hold on to. good thoughts

Don't waste a minute of life.I realised that once i had retired.

Lines on our face is our own personal map of laughter, joy, heartache, pain, loss all part of living that stamps us with having survived and enjoyed it all! Beautiful write!

I like those dogs with all those creases in their face but can't recall there name. To me they have character and it's the same when I see a person with lots of lines on their face, you just know he or she has lived a bit and earned everyone! Nice clever poem Lyn. By the way that Barmaid had creases in her face, but nobody was looking at her face!

Lines on our own face is like a river that we face in life it can be a flow of hardness could be a road of happiness and when mirrors tell us these line on us just remember, be wise...and it all what the meaning of lines in our faces_Soul

Quite symmetrical, rhythmical and harmonious write, beats are like a balanced galloping sound..very poetic in garb and content both, Lyn... a deep and nice poem! ! !

Lines on your sweet face have finally been instrumental for these beautiful lines of the poem. A fine experience of reading a true poem indeed it was Lyn Paul!

Beautiful Lines on my Face...I just loved reading it. Some positivity it filled in me.....I just happened to see your poem and I couldn't resist making a comment on it.. I read it at least thrice..Loved it...++++10

beautifully drives in the message - each one of us can touch other lives. so well penned, Lyn.