Thursday, November 8, 2018

The Line Of Life Comments

Rating: 4.5

in a thick milk bottle
a dark green one
which grandfather found on the beach after the war
having inside a shriveled yellow paper
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COMMENTS
A B Faniki 20 August 2019

A brilliant piece with images that 1 could cheerish thus it can make 1 sad a bit.Thanks 4 sharin

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Jane Campion 13 June 2019

Just beautifully crafted from the filigree of life.

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Chinedu Dike 06 June 2019

A beautiful love story elegantly brought forth with clarity of thought and mind. Lovely and very Passionate.

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Prabir Gayen 17 February 2019

when it rains on the sea and it`s lightning on both sides of the paper two overlapping palms can be seen one of a woman and the other of a man crossed in filigree by a single line of life nothing else....fine poem

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Rajnish Manga 10 November 2018

Extremely poignant and emotional poem devoted to poet's grand parents who meant so much for each other.

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Jazib Kamalvi 09 November 2018

A good start with a nice poem, Valentin B. You may like to read my poem, Love And Iust. Thank you.

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