The Lily (Ο Κρίνος) Comments

he burns me and he falls over me Is not passive I continually fight it. indirectly you are expressing your desire.. lovely poem of desire and love..

Do not let go of foreign kisses Which yes and passing? Only if he stands, here, He, Like.. In love Lily! .. like your poems very much and the words you write...... thank you dear poetess. Dev

he burns me and he falls over me Is not passive I continually fight it. love only if he stands here like the lilly. a beautiful comparison taking the lilly as a staying symbol. loved your poem and the imagination and the use of symbols.. thank you dear poetess. tony

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