Monday, March 11, 2019

The Lighthouse Comments

Rating: 4.8

I was going to lose light soon
It was a warm September evening
From nowhere came a huge gust of wind
The sky turned a deep grey, down came the rain
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Jennifer Birchall
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Mahtab Bangalee 13 March 2019

here in the beach of mind in the beach of thought in the beach of eye in the stranded pitch of heart suddenly; everything happens suddenly, light comes suddenly after the lost..........

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Matthew Holloway 12 March 2019

A very well written poem loved the scene you painted

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Julia Luber 11 March 2019

Great poem about a storm at sea. I can practically feel both the fear during the gales and rocking and then I can feel the sudden relief in making it home safe to shore. Great share. As vivid as a Storm Watch on television!

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Jennifer Birchall

Jennifer Birchall

Cheshire, England
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