Sunday, October 15, 2017

The Lighthouse Comments

Rating: 5.0

Standing tall is the tower by the shore,
When all around you doesn't even reach,
Your height that will sky breach,
Against the salty wind along the beach.
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Vishorag Shadja
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Subhas Chandra Chakra 02 November 2017

Yet, the salty air doesn't stop, Humidity and cold over the top. Bringing about rain and clouds, With fog and squall and shrouds. A lovely writing on the lonely light house, so delicately written. 10+++ for it.

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Binayakumar Mohanty 27 October 2017

Nicely crafted poem.Thanks for sharing.10

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Bernard F. Asuncion 15 October 2017

Such an excellent write, Vishorag...10++++

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Vishorag Shadja 18 October 2017

Thank you for your kind words of encouragement :)

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